I just scribbled down a fast poem and wanted to get some feed back. I also like how it came out, so wanted to share it with you, my readers.
She waits, she works
she spins and twirls.
Merrily on her way she goes
in a dance that no one knows.
He paces, he panics
He dashes to run races.
Frantically rushing every where
in a rave that no one knows.
They talk, they listen
They move all about
Sweetly whispering and giggling in the other’s ears
in a life no on really knows about.